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《新東方·托福高分範文大全》精選近年考生親曆機經題目，題目涵蓋教育、科技、傳媒、文化、社會、環保等幾乎全部托福作文話題。獨立寫作部分提供瞭145篇考生所寫高分範文，範文多角度、全方位展現瞭托福寫作的各種論證技巧，且在文章結構、段落結構、句型結構以及用詞方麵都具有多樣化的特色，可助考生開拓思路，提高寫作技巧。綜閤寫作部分精編瞭10道高仿真題目，模擬考試情境，提供高質量範文，同時附贈聽力文章音頻下載。《新東方·托福高分範文大全》所有範文均經中外托福寫作專傢嚴格審閱，考生可通過精讀、背誦以及模仿來提高自己的寫作水平，最終攻剋托福寫作難關。
作者簡介
戴雲，教育培訓與留學申請專傢，新東方教育科技集團高級教師培訓師，北京新東方學校北美項目部總監，曾任北京科技大學公共英語係黨支部書記、北京新東方學校綜閤能力部總監、VIP學習部總監、北京新東方學校英語學習部總監，麵授學生超過20萬人，曾榮獲“新東方十周年功勛奬”、“新東方20周年功勛人物奬”和“北京市園丁奬”，功底深厚，學識豐富，幽默激情，真誠親切，樂觀積極，被廣大學生稱為“新東方教主”。參與翻譯齣版瞭《新托福考試官方指南》等著作，已齣版的暢銷著作包括《iBT托福語法精要》、《新托福寫作詞匯小伴侶》、《新托福詞匯10000》、《托福高分範文大全》和《雅思語法精要與劍橋雅思閱讀長難句分析》、《雅思寫作高分範文集》等。
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目錄
第一章 托福寫作簡介第二章 獨立寫作高分範文
1.Movies： serious or entertaining
嚴肅電影還是娛樂電影
2.Is relating well to others more important than studying hard
搞好人際關係比努力學習更重要嗎
3.Do grades encourage students to learn
分數鼓勵學生學習嗎
4.Is daily homework necessary for students
學生有必要每天都做傢庭作業嗎
5.Is the ability to write well more important than that of speaking
寫作能力比口語能力更重要嗎
6.What can help you to succeed
什麼能幫助你走嚮成功
7.Is it more important to work quickly with risks making mistakes than to work slowly with everything correct
冒著犯錯誤的風險高速地工作比確保萬無一失地緩慢工作更重要嗎
8.Is it essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
年輕人必須具備組織管理纔能嗎
9.Shouldn't people pay for public transportation
人們應該免費搭乘公共交通工具嗎
10.Land： for human needs or for endangered animals
土地用於人類需求還是瀕危動物
11.Should the government focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development
政府應當更加注重環保，並減少對經濟發展的重視程度嗎
12.Should people work in the same company or for the same employer for their whole life
人們應在同一傢公司或為同一個雇主效力終生嗎
13.Should young people try different jobs before they decide on their long-term job or career
年輕人應當在決定長期從事的職業之前先嘗試做不同的工作嗎
14.Is it advisable for teenage children to take part-time jobs
十幾歲的孩子做兼職工作可取嗎
15.Are some scientists responsible for the negative impacts made by their discoveries
有些科學傢應對其科學發現所産生的負麵影響負責嗎
16.Is advertising the main cause of unhealthy eating habits
廣告是導緻不健康飲食習慣的主要原因嗎
17.Does playing sports teach us about life
體育運動教給人們人生的道理嗎
18.Are environmental issues too complex to be handled by the individual
由於環境問題過於復雜，個人是無法應對的嗎
19.The most important things for governments to do to improve health care
政府為改善醫療保健需做的最重要的工作
20.The only way the government can conserve energy
政府保護能源的唯一途徑
21.Were people friendlier in the past than they are today
過去的人們比現在的人們更友好嗎
22.Is visiting museums the best way to learn about a country
瞭解一個國傢最好的方法就是參觀博物館嗎
23.Choosing a subject that interests you or one preparing you for a better job or career
選擇一門你感興趣的學科還是選擇職業傾嚮性強的學科
24.Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel
跟團旅行是最好的旅行方式嗎
25.Should the government focus its budget more on young children's education rather than on universities
政府應將更多預算投入到青少年教育上而非高等教育上嗎
26.A large company or a small one， which do you want to work for
就職於大公司還是小公司
27.Making friends with intelligent people or with humorous people
與聰明人交朋友還是與幽默的人交朋友
28.Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship
讓一個朋友犯錯誤勝過說一些可能傷害友情的話或做一些可能傷害友情的事
29.Advice： from friends older than you or from those of your age
建議：采納來自年長朋友的還是同齡朋友的
30.Do some people like to spend time alone when relaxing
放鬆的時候，有些人喜歡獨處
31.Are students more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
學生受老師的影響比受朋友的影響更多嗎
32.Should the most important education for students be conducted in the classroom， but not out of the classroom
對學生最重要的教育是在教室裏進行的，而不是教室外
33.Is knowledge gained through study more important than the ability to be creative
通過學習收獲的知識比創新能力更重要
34.Finishing a project completely then to another one or doing two or several projects at a time
先徹底完成一個項目再轉嚮另一個項目，還是同時進行兩個或兩個以上的項目
35.Solving questions using our own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice
利用自己的知識和經驗還是詢問他人的建議來解決問題
36.Is it a good method to give the same grade to all the members who do the same project together
每個組員都獲得相同的分數是評價他們的好辦法嗎
37.Is it better to select broad subjects than specialize in a specific subject
選擇寬泛的學科比專注於一門學科更好
38.Should drivers pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive out in traffic busy time
司機應該繳納一定的費用以獲得在交通高峰時段駕駛的許可嗎
39.Is the extended family less important than it was before
大傢庭沒有過去重要瞭嗎
40.Will people reduce car use in 20 years
20年後，人們會減少對汽車的使用嗎
41.Spending money on something that lasts for a long time， or something that provides a short-term pleasure
把錢花在保存時間較長的物品上還是短期享受上
42. Is it difficult for people to know whom to believe or who is telling the truth because of so many sources of information
information
由於太多的信息資源，人們已經很難分辨誰是可以信任的，誰說的是真話
43.Do people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in a foreign country
比起國外遊，人們更得益於國內遊
44.Choosing a job： one with more vacation time， or one with high paying but less vacation time
選擇何種工作：較多假期的工作，還是高薪但假期短的工作
45.Has technology made children less creative than they were in the past
科技是否使孩子們不如以前那麼有創造力瞭
46.Should governments spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics
政府應該投入更多資金支持藝術，而不是競技體育
47.Is one's working more important than being with one's family
工作比與傢人共處更重要嗎
48.Won't students use printed books any more in 20 years
20年以後，學生將不再使用紙質圖書
49.Is physical exercise more important for older people than younger people
比起年輕人，體育鍛煉對老年人更重要
50.Could people learn more from watching television than reading books
比起讀書，人們可以從看電視中學到更多的東西
51.Should people be taught how to manage money at an early age
人們應該在很小的時候就學習如何理財嗎
52.Should teachers be paid according to their students' performance
教師應根據他們學生的錶現優劣拿工資嗎
53.Be more like others or be different from everyone else
更從眾還是與眾不同
54.Does technology make people's lives simpler rather than more complicated
技術使人們的生活變得更加簡單而不是更加復雜嗎
55.Should people live in a city or a country all their lives instead of moving to another place
人們應該終生住在同一座城市或者同一個國傢，而不應搬遷到其他地方去嗎
56.Does telephone have greater influence on people's lives than TV
電話對人們生活的影響大於電視嗎
57.Is it more important to have rules about the types of clothing that people wear at work or at school
設立規定以限製人們工作或上學時的著裝類型有必要嗎
58.Are most business people motivated only by the desire for money
大多數企業傢隻受金錢欲的驅使嗎
59.Is it desirable to know events from all over the world
瞭解全世界發生的事件有必要嗎
60.Children should not be allowed to play computer games
不應該允許孩子們玩電腦遊戲嗎
61.People buy things not because they need them， but because others buy them
人們買東西並非因為需要，而是由於彆人也買
62.Is university education the most important factor in a person's success
大學教育是個人成功的最重要因素嗎
63.Shouldn't people be permitted to use mobile phones on public transportation vehicles
應當禁止人們在公共交通工具上使用手機嗎
64.Should students in all fields be required to take basic science courses
應該要求所有專業的學生都學習基礎科學課程嗎
65.The most important investment for a big company
對大公司來說最重要的投資
66.Are people now easier to become educated than in the past
現在，人們接受教育比過去容易嗎
67.Choosing friends that have fun with or that help you when you need them
選擇能與你一起玩樂的朋友還是選擇能在你需要時給予幫助的朋友
68.Should children play and study rather than learn how to do household chores
孩子們應該好好學習、開心玩耍，而不必學做傢務
69.People would be happier with fewer possessions
所得較少的人會更幸福
70.Should people buy things that are made in their own country
人們應該購買國産商品嗎
71.Is it impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork
在團隊協作中，如果一個人無法接受批評，就不可能成功
72.Should all teachers be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge
應該要求教師每5年進修相應課程以更新其知識儲備嗎
73.Should high school students take a course on basic economics
中學生應該學習基礎經濟學課程嗎
74.The best way to teach children about responsibility
教會孩子何謂責任的最好方法
75.Watching a movie： in a cinema or at home
看電影：去電影院還是在傢
76.Does an effective leader try to make others feel that they are part of decision-making
一位高效的領導者總是讓下屬感覺他們也加入到瞭決策製定的過程之中嗎
77.Should parents reward their children with money for the high grades
傢長應該對孩子的高分給予金錢形式的奬勵嗎
78.Will people feel happier when they finish a challenging or difficult work
人們在完成有挑戰性或艱難工作時幸福感更強烈嗎
79.Should parents help to determine the future of their children
父母應當幫助決定孩子的未來嗎
80.A job with low salary and more security or one with high salary but easier to lose
選擇工資低但穩定的工作還是工資高但容易失去的工作
81.Are younger school children （age 5 -10） required to study art and music
應該要求5至10歲的已入學兒童學習美術和音樂嗎
82.Which are more interesting， movies and TV programs made in your own country or ones made in other
countries
哪些更有趣：國産的電影電視節目還是國外的電影電視節目
83.What should movies and televisions show the audience
電視或電影應該嚮觀眾傳達些什麼
84.Shouldn't teachers show their political or social views to students in the class
教師不應該在課堂上把自己的政治或社會觀念傳達給學生嗎
85.Helping students gain self-confidence or teaching specific knowledge
幫助學生獲得自信還是教授他們基本知識
86.Should teachers be paid at least as much as lawyers， doctors， and business leaders are paid
教師的工資至少要和律師、醫生和企業傢一樣高
87.Should university students be required to take at least one course that teaches them the culture of a country
rather than their own
大學生應該選修至少一門有關其他國傢文化的課程
88.Do most of the advertisements make products appear better than they really are
大多數廣告都美化瞭商品嗎
89.Working 3 days a week with long hours or working 5 days a week with short hours
每周工作3天、每天工作時間較長，還是每周工作5天、每天工作時間較短
90.Can people take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside
與在農村居住相比，人們在大城市居住可以更好地照顧自己的傢人嗎
91.Is it better for children to choose jobs similar to their parents'
孩子選擇與父母相同的工作更好嗎
92.In order to achieve happiness for yourself， you have to try to make other people happy
為瞭獲得個人幸福，你必須使他人幸福
93.Should people have hobbies and do physical activities different from their work
人們應該擁有與自己工作截然不同的愛好或進行與自己工作截然不同的體育運動嗎
94.Should advertisements targeting children aged between 2 and 5 be banned
應該禁止針對2到5歲兒童的廣告嗎
95.Do what you already do well or try new things
輕車熟路還是勇於創新
96.A big party with many people or a small party just with family
舉辦很多人參加的大型聚會還是隻有傢人參加的小型聚會
97.To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than success
在失敗時保持樂觀比成功本身更重要
98.Should university students in all fields be required to take history courses
應該要求所有專業的大學生都選修曆史課嗎
99.Should a person make an important decision alone
人們應該獨自作齣重要決定嗎
100. Is the ability to cooperate well with others more important today than it was in the past
如今，與他人良好閤作的能力比過去更重要瞭嗎
101. Will people spend less time on cooking food in 20 years
20年以後，人們用在做飯上的時間會變得更少嗎
102.Should governments spend more money on developing Internet access instead of public transportation
政府應該將更多資金投入到互聯網建設而不是公共交通建設之中嗎
103. We only do what we like to do rather than what we should do
我們隻做我們喜歡做的而不做應該做的嗎
104. Students who can keep their own rooms organized are more likely to succeed
將自己的房間整理得井然有序的學生更有可能成功嗎
105.Should children only play sports for fun rather than in competitions or contests
孩子們參加體育活動應該僅僅以玩耍為目的而不應以比賽為目的嗎
106. People who are interested in different things cannot be friends
興趣不同的人很難成為朋友嗎
107. People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team
持有不同觀點的人組成的團隊無法取得成功嗎
108.Challenging plans or practical plans
選擇挑戰性的計劃還是實際的計劃
109.There's no need for the government to help those who can help themselves
政府沒有必要幫助那些可以自救的人嗎
110.Does the way a person is dressed indicate his character or personality
一個人的著裝風格是其性格或個性的體現嗎
111.Should students spend a year on traveling or working before they go to colleges or universities
在上大學之前，學生應該用一年時間旅行或工作嗎
112.Solving problems using personal knowledge and experience or asking for others' advice
運用自己的知識和經驗還是詢問他人的建議來解決問題
113.Today's parents do not understand their children as well as parents did 50 years ago
當今的父母不如50年前的父母理解自己的孩子
114.Should the government support scientific research that does not have any practical use
政府應該支持那些無任何實際用途的科學研究嗎
115. Are newspapers and magazines the best ways to learn about a foreign country
報紙和雜誌是瞭解外國的最佳途徑嗎
116. Do professional athletes deserve high salaries
職業運動員理應得到高薪嗎
117. The advantages and disadvantages of moving to a new city or a new country
搬到另一座城市或另一個國傢居住的利與弊
118. Is it important for families to have meals together regularly
傢人經常聚餐很重要嗎
119. Are our lives better than our grandparents' lives when they were young
我們現在的日子比祖父母小時候的日子要好嗎
120. Should schools ask students to evaluate their teachers
學校應該讓學生評價他們的老師嗎
121. Planning or not planning for your leisure time
對閑暇時間計劃與否
122. Should people read only those books that deal with real matters
人們應該隻閱讀那些描寫真人真事的書籍嗎
123. Only people who earn a lot of money are successful
隻有有錢人纔是成功的
124. Items made by hand or items by machine， which do you prefer
你喜歡手工製品還是機器製品
125. Complain in writing or in person
書麵投訴還是當麵投訴
126. Why is music important to many people
音樂為什麼對很多人非常重要
127. Buy a house or a business
買房子，還是買企業
128. Living in university housing or an apartment in the community
住在大學宿捨還是社區公寓
129.Living in places that have the same climate all year long， or in areas where the climate changes several times a year
住在氣候終年不變的地方，還是住在氣候一年數變的地方
130. Which famous person from history would you like to meet
你希望遇到曆史上的哪位名人
131. Have telephone and email made communication between people less personal
電話和電子郵件使得人們之間的溝通缺少人情味兒瞭
132.Should children begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school
孩子是否應該一上學就開始學外語
133.Hire an inexperienced worker with a lower salary or an experienced one with a higher salary
雇用無經驗低薪酬的員工還是有經驗高薪酬的員工
134. Are games equally important for adults and children
遊戲對成年人和兒童來說一樣重要嗎
135. What makes a good son or daughter
好兒子或好女兒需具備哪些重要素質
136. Which do you prefer， getting up early or late
你喜歡早起還是晚起
137. Travel alone or with a companion
單獨旅行還是結伴旅行
138. Do we need “Never， never give up”
我們是否需要 “永不，永不放棄”
139. Is progress always good
進步總是好事嗎
140. A transportation vehicle that has changed people's lives
一種改變人類生活的交通工具
141. Live performance or television broadcast， which is more enjoyable
現場錶演和電視轉播哪個更精彩
142. Do you like a new high school to be built in your community
你贊成在你的社區建一所新的高中嗎
143. Should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing
人們有時應該做自己不喜歡做的事情嗎
144. The advantages and disadvantages of my city
我的城市的優點與缺點
145. The causes of people's longevity today
現代人長壽的原因
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精彩書摘
Robinson Crusoe is only a dream hero existing in people's fancy world of imagination.As social beings, humans can never do without the help and support from others.Isolation is the strongest enemy in one's career life.It has been widely acknowledged that relating well to others paves the way for people to achieve professional success.However, that does not mean what has been learned in class is not worthwhile.In my opinion, building good relationship with others is as important as studying hard at school.
Above all, knowledge is power, just as Thomas Jefferson once expressed.To some extent, the essences contained within all school subjects simply resemble the concrete frames of architecture.Without them, the building would soon collapse.In order to achieve success in one's future career life, it is imperative for students to study hard at school.Therefore, there is no excuse for any student to shun the most fundamental task of studying.The "No pains, no gains" concept should be deeply rooted in the mind.Diligence is the premise of a bright future.In this regard, we may refer to Madam Curie, a Polish physicist and chemist famous for her pioneering research on radioactivity.She studied hard at school and earned her higher degrees.The subsequent scientific research made her the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes-in physics and in chemistry.She was the first femaleprofessor at the University of Paris.Evidently, these unprecedented achievements owed much to Madame Curie'suntiring efforts at school.
Secondly, the modern world values teamwork, which is a key to career success.Only through interactionswith partners can one master the art of cooperation.This vividly demonstrates the significance of relating wellto others.At school, there are many projects or group work assigned to students.The participation in any projectrequires the united efforts of all group members.During the course of a group task, each individual has to worktogether with their partners.Bearing in mind their common goal, all members are devoted to their assigned partof the task.Just like different components of an engine, everyone is interrelated.If a single part refuses to function,the whole engine may suddenly stop or even break down.It is such a dramatic effect that depicts the value ofworking harmoniously and resolving any conflicts.
Nevertheless, even though we have ascertained the value of diligence at school and also testified to the importance of building good relationships with others, there is still one point that must be especially emphasized.To illustrate, it is not wise to become bookworms and spend all one's school time reading textbooks.By no means could one succeed if he or she is only good at reciting theories and cannot put what has been learned into practice.Therefore, a practical study plan ought'to be made.After all, every student is entitled to spend some time with their friends.
To sum up, working diligently at school is a fundamental task on the part of students.On the other hand, learning how to relate well to others before entering employment is also important.Every single day spent on campus ought to be made full use of, as this crucial period in life definitely constitutes a stepping stone to a brighter future.
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前言/序言
目前，各國已普遍采用托福網考的新模式，即大傢所熟知的TOEFLiBT（internet-Based Test），考試結構與考試內容也隨著考試模式的變化而有所改變。新托福改革瞭舊托福的試題框架，新增瞭口語測試，同時也加強瞭寫作的測試力度，更注重考查應試者的英語綜閤能力。留學生若想在純英文環境下完成艱巨的學習任務，紮實的語言功底是必須具備的能力，而托福考試成績能夠比較客觀地反映留學生的英語水平，所以受到美、歐、澳、亞各類學校的普遍重視，因而取得傲人的托福高分是考生的共同夢想。
近年來，全球平均每年參加托福考試的人數高達80萬。ETS公布的數據顯示，2012年中國托福考生人數較2011年增長瞭32%，預計此增長勢頭在2013年及以後幾年仍將持續。麵臨如此激烈的競爭，各位考生必須從容應對。而托福寫作是考生獲取高分必須攻剋的一道難關。
在備戰托福寫作時，許多中國考生為不能快速、有效地提高寫作能力而煩惱。而一本高質量的托福範文書則是祛除這塊心病的一劑良藥。但是，目前市麵上的托福範文書所選題目太過陳舊，明顯不會再齣現在托福寫作考試中；有的托福範文中涵蓋的寫作技巧不夠全麵，總是用一兩種方法寫作，並不適閤寫作基礎韆差萬彆的考生；有的托福範文遣詞造句不夠地道，談不上有精彩之處，對考生提升寫作能力沒有太大幫助。倘若備考資料的範文水平不高，又怎麼能期待考生的寫作水平迅速提高呢？而盲目的練習、背誦與模仿容易使考生陷入寫作備考的誤區，導緻“事倍功半”的尷尬，甚至導緻考生留學夢想的破滅。
為瞭幫助考生以科學的方法攻剋托福寫作難關，嚮赴異國求學的光輝目標邁進，這本融入瞭作者多年心血的《托福高分範文大全》應運而生瞭。
本書具有以下特色：
特色一：題目新、真、全
新：書中精選的題目全部是最近幾年纔考過的新題；
真：書中的題目全部來自考生親曆的全真機經；
全：書中題目涵蓋教育、科技、傳媒、文化、社會、環保等幾乎全部托福作文話題。
特色二：通過範文闡釋寫作技巧
範文應用瞭托福寫作的各種論證技巧，如例證法、對比法、拆分法等。
以範文為媒介，嚮考生全方位、多角度展現寫作技巧是如何運用於寫作實踐的。
考生可通過精讀範文、背誦經典段落以及模仿範文來提高自己的寫作水平。
特色三：注重多樣化，避免重復單一
範文具備多樣化的特色，即實現瞭文章結構、段落結構、句型結構以及用詞的多樣化，從而幫助考生開拓思路，且掌握多樣化的寫作技巧，最終為自己的文章增光添彩，贏得閱捲人的青睞。
特色四：權威把關，精益求精
每篇範文均經過海外資深寫作專傢的精心潤飾，並且由國內頂級托福名師嚴格審閱把關，力求做到精益求精。
誠然，寫作能力的培養絕非易事，但擁有一本優秀的範文書，就如同擁有一位好老師，莘莘學子會在她的指引下，找到開啓成功之門的鑰匙，進而為快速、有效地提高自己的寫作水平奠定穩固的基礎，《托福高分範文大全》無疑就是這樣一位好老師。衷心祝願廣大考生能夠跟隨她的腳步，在托福寫作備考過程中不斷積纍、不懈奮鬥，並最終在考場上取得夢寐以求的優異成績！
用戶評價
拿到這本《新東方 托福高分範文大全》純屬偶然，當時在書店裏漫無目的地翻找，它就靜靜地躺在那裏，封麵設計簡潔大氣，吸引瞭我。我當時的心情就像一個在迷霧中摸索的旅人，對托福寫作的“高分”到底是什麼樣子，始終沒有一個清晰的概念。我參加過幾次模考，寫作分數總是徘徊不前，那幾篇滿分範文，我看得懂，卻寫不齣來。我嘗試過模仿，也試過背誦，但總覺得隔靴搔癢，無法內化成自己的東西。我最希望從這本書中找到的是一種“通透”的感覺，不隻是看到高分的文章，更能理解高分的邏輯，明白作者是如何組織思路，如何選擇詞匯，如何運用句式來達到如此令人驚嘆的效果。我期待的不僅僅是“範文”本身，更是一種“範式”，一種可以被拆解、被學習、最終被融會貫通的寫作方法論。我希望能看到文章不僅僅是語言上的優美，更在於思想的深刻，論證的嚴謹，以及對問題的多角度剖析。如果能有對範文的詳細解析，解釋為什麼這樣寫能夠得高分，那將是我最大的驚喜。我還在探索如何讓我的寫作擺脫“中式英語”的痕跡，如何讓我的觀點更加鮮明有力，如何纔能在有限的時間內寫齣既有深度又有廣度的文章。這本書，能否成為我寫作道路上的指路明燈，讓我看到高分的曙光？我帶著這樣的疑問和期待，翻開瞭它。
評分拿到這本《新東方 托福高分範文大全》，我首先想到的是，它是否能真正解答我內心深處的睏惑：究竟什麼樣的寫作纔能稱得上是“高分”？在我看來，托福寫作的高分不僅僅是語言上的優美，更是思想上的深刻，邏輯上的嚴謹，以及錶達上的精準。我參加過幾次托福考試，寫作分數總是不盡如人意，這讓我對自己的寫作能力産生瞭嚴重的懷疑。我嘗試過閱讀一些高分範文，但總覺得它們離我的實際能力太遠，我能理解其中的意思，卻很難復製其中的精髓。我渴望從這本書中找到一種“可操作性”的學習方法，不僅僅是提供一些優秀的範文，更能深入剖析這些範文的寫作思路和技巧。我希望它能教會我如何審題，如何構思，如何組織段落，如何選擇恰當的詞匯和句式來清晰、有力地錶達自己的觀點。我尤其希望能從書中學習到如何避免一些常見的寫作錯誤，比如邏輯不清，論據不足，或者語言錶達過於生硬。我希望這本書能成為我寫作道路上的一個“指南針”，幫助我找到正確的方嚮，剋服寫作中的睏難，最終實現寫作水平的突破。我期待它能給我帶來一種“醍醐灌頂”的體驗，讓我對托福寫作有一個全新的認識，並能切實地提升我的寫作能力。
評分這本書的到來，更像是在我一片迷茫的備考之路上，偶然間拾到瞭一張精美的藏寶圖，雖然我還不確定寶藏是否就在圖上標齣的位置，但至少，它給瞭我一個方嚮，一個追尋的目標。我一直在思考，托福寫作所謂的“高分”，究竟是一種怎樣的水平？是純粹的詞匯堆砌？是復雜的句式組閤？還是思想的深度與廣度？我渴望的是一種能讓我“豁然開朗”的頓悟，而不是機械的模仿和背誦。我希望這本書能像一位經驗豐富的導師，不僅給我展示優秀的範文，更能深入淺齣地剖析這些範文的“高分秘訣”。我期待看到作者如何引導我們去審題，如何構建清晰的文章結構，如何選擇恰當的論據來支持自己的觀點，以及如何在有限的時間內，將這些要素完美地融閤在一起。有時候，我會在寫作文時感到詞窮，找不到閤適的詞語來錶達我的想法，或者寫齣來的句子總是顯得那麼“平淡無奇”。我希望能從這本書中學習到如何拓展詞匯量，如何運用更具錶現力的詞匯，以及如何通過多樣的句式來增強文章的錶達力。我更希望它能教會我如何將自己的思考邏輯清晰地呈現在紙上，讓我的觀點更有說服力，讓我的文章更有深度。這本書，能否成為我打破寫作瓶頸的鑰匙？我懷著忐忑而又充滿希望的心情，期待著它能給我帶來不一樣的啓示。
評分拿到《新東方 托福高分範文大全》，我的第一反應是，這會是一本“救命稻草”嗎？我一直以來對托福寫作都有一種莫名的恐懼感，總覺得自己的錶達能力遠遠不夠，每次模考，寫作分數都是我最大的短闆。我能看懂一些網上的高分範文，但總覺得它們遙不可及，像是另一個層麵的語言藝術，而我卻始終無法觸及。我渴望的是一種能夠讓我“撥開雲霧見月明”的引導，而不僅僅是提供一些優秀的範文讓我去膜拜。我希望這本書能夠教會我如何從根本上提升我的寫作能力，而不是簡單地教我如何“套路化”寫作。我期待它能提供一些實用的技巧，比如如何進行有效的頭腦風暴，如何構建清晰的文章結構，如何選擇恰當的論據來支撐我的觀點，以及如何運用豐富的詞匯和多樣的句式來增強文章的錶現力。我更希望它能幫助我剋服在寫作過程中遇到的各種睏難，比如找不到閤適的詞語，句子結構單一，或者邏輯不清。我希望能從這本書中學習到一種“思考框架”，一種能夠讓我麵對任何寫作題目，都能 confidently 地組織語言，清晰有力地錶達自己觀點的能力。這本書，能否成為我通往高分寫作之路的敲門磚？我帶著一份期待，也帶著一份對自身不足的清醒認知，翻開瞭它。
評分翻開這本書，我腦海中第一個閃過的念頭是：我需要的不隻是“範文”，更是“範思”。我參加過很多次托福考試，寫作分數總是在一個不上不下的區間徘徊，這讓我非常沮喪。我能理解那些高分範文中的好詞好句，但當我試圖自己寫作時，卻總感覺抓不住“精髓”，寫齣來的文章總顯得有些空洞，缺乏邏輯的嚴謹性和思想的深度。我經常會糾結於如何組織我的觀點，如何讓我的論證更有說服力。有時候，我會因為找不到恰當的詞語來錶達某個 nuanced 的意思而感到焦慮，或者寫齣來的句子結構總是韆篇一律，顯得單調乏味。我特彆希望這本書能夠提供一種“解剖式”的學習方法，不僅僅是展示高分範文，更能細緻地分析這些範文的每一個組成部分：作者是如何審題的？如何確定文章的主題句？如何選擇支持性的論據？如何運用過渡詞來連接不同的段落和句子？更重要的是，我希望能從這本書中學習到如何將自己的想法有效地轉化為清晰、有力的英文錶達，如何讓我的寫作風格更加自然、流暢，並且具有一定的深度和原創性。我渴望找到一種方法，能夠讓我真正理解托福寫作高分的底層邏輯，而不僅僅是停留在錶麵的模仿。
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