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戴云，教育培训与留学申请专家，新东方教育科技集团高级教师培训师，北京新东方学校北美项目部总监，曾任北京科技大学公共英语系党支部书记、北京新东方学校综合能力部总监、VIP学习部总监、北京新东方学校英语学习部总监，面授学生超过20万人，曾荣获“新东方十周年功勋奖”、“新东方20周年功勋人物奖”和“北京市园丁奖”，功底深厚，学识丰富，幽默激情，真诚亲切，乐观积极，被广大学生称为“新东方教主”。参与翻译出版了《新托福考试官方指南》等著作，已出版的畅销著作包括《iBT托福语法精要》、《新托福写作词汇小伴侣》、《新托福词汇10000》、《托福高分范文大全》和《雅思语法精要与剑桥雅思阅读长难句分析》、《雅思写作高分范文集》等。
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目录
第一章 托福写作简介第二章 独立写作高分范文
1.Movies： serious or entertaining
严肃电影还是娱乐电影
2.Is relating well to others more important than studying hard
搞好人际关系比努力学习更重要吗
3.Do grades encourage students to learn
分数鼓励学生学习吗
4.Is daily homework necessary for students
学生有必要每天都做家庭作业吗
5.Is the ability to write well more important than that of speaking
写作能力比口语能力更重要吗
6.What can help you to succeed
什么能帮助你走向成功
7.Is it more important to work quickly with risks making mistakes than to work slowly with everything correct
冒着犯错误的风险高速地工作比确保万无一失地缓慢工作更重要吗
8.Is it essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
年轻人必须具备组织管理才能吗
9.Shouldn't people pay for public transportation
人们应该免费搭乘公共交通工具吗
10.Land： for human needs or for endangered animals
土地用于人类需求还是濒危动物
11.Should the government focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development
政府应当更加注重环保，并减少对经济发展的重视程度吗
12.Should people work in the same company or for the same employer for their whole life
人们应在同一家公司或为同一个雇主效力终生吗
13.Should young people try different jobs before they decide on their long-term job or career
年轻人应当在决定长期从事的职业之前先尝试做不同的工作吗
14.Is it advisable for teenage children to take part-time jobs
十几岁的孩子做兼职工作可取吗
15.Are some scientists responsible for the negative impacts made by their discoveries
有些科学家应对其科学发现所产生的负面影响负责吗
16.Is advertising the main cause of unhealthy eating habits
广告是导致不健康饮食习惯的主要原因吗
17.Does playing sports teach us about life
体育运动教给人们人生的道理吗
18.Are environmental issues too complex to be handled by the individual
由于环境问题过于复杂，个人是无法应对的吗
19.The most important things for governments to do to improve health care
政府为改善医疗保健需做的最重要的工作
20.The only way the government can conserve energy
政府保护能源的唯一途径
21.Were people friendlier in the past than they are today
过去的人们比现在的人们更友好吗
22.Is visiting museums the best way to learn about a country
了解一个国家最好的方法就是参观博物馆吗
23.Choosing a subject that interests you or one preparing you for a better job or career
选择一门你感兴趣的学科还是选择职业倾向性强的学科
24.Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel
跟团旅行是最好的旅行方式吗
25.Should the government focus its budget more on young children's education rather than on universities
政府应将更多预算投入到青少年教育上而非高等教育上吗
26.A large company or a small one， which do you want to work for
就职于大公司还是小公司
27.Making friends with intelligent people or with humorous people
与聪明人交朋友还是与幽默的人交朋友
28.Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that may destroy your friendship
让一个朋友犯错误胜过说一些可能伤害友情的话或做一些可能伤害友情的事
29.Advice： from friends older than you or from those of your age
建议：采纳来自年长朋友的还是同龄朋友的
30.Do some people like to spend time alone when relaxing
放松的时候，有些人喜欢独处
31.Are students more influenced by their teachers than by their friends
学生受老师的影响比受朋友的影响更多吗
32.Should the most important education for students be conducted in the classroom， but not out of the classroom
对学生最重要的教育是在教室里进行的，而不是教室外
33.Is knowledge gained through study more important than the ability to be creative
通过学习收获的知识比创新能力更重要
34.Finishing a project completely then to another one or doing two or several projects at a time
先彻底完成一个项目再转向另一个项目，还是同时进行两个或两个以上的项目
35.Solving questions using our own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice
利用自己的知识和经验还是询问他人的建议来解决问题
36.Is it a good method to give the same grade to all the members who do the same project together
每个组员都获得相同的分数是评价他们的好办法吗
37.Is it better to select broad subjects than specialize in a specific subject
选择宽泛的学科比专注于一门学科更好
38.Should drivers pay a certain amount of fees in order to be permitted to drive out in traffic busy time
司机应该缴纳一定的费用以获得在交通高峰时段驾驶的许可吗
39.Is the extended family less important than it was before
大家庭没有过去重要了吗
40.Will people reduce car use in 20 years
20年后，人们会减少对汽车的使用吗
41.Spending money on something that lasts for a long time， or something that provides a short-term pleasure
把钱花在保存时间较长的物品上还是短期享受上
42. Is it difficult for people to know whom to believe or who is telling the truth because of so many sources of information
information
由于太多的信息资源，人们已经很难分辨谁是可以信任的，谁说的是真话
43.Do people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in a foreign country
比起国外游，人们更得益于国内游
44.Choosing a job： one with more vacation time， or one with high paying but less vacation time
选择何种工作：较多假期的工作，还是高薪但假期短的工作
45.Has technology made children less creative than they were in the past
科技是否使孩子们不如以前那么有创造力了
46.Should governments spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics
政府应该投入更多资金支持艺术，而不是竞技体育
47.Is one's working more important than being with one's family
工作比与家人共处更重要吗
48.Won't students use printed books any more in 20 years
20年以后，学生将不再使用纸质图书
49.Is physical exercise more important for older people than younger people
比起年轻人，体育锻炼对老年人更重要
50.Could people learn more from watching television than reading books
比起读书，人们可以从看电视中学到更多的东西
51.Should people be taught how to manage money at an early age
人们应该在很小的时候就学习如何理财吗
52.Should teachers be paid according to their students' performance
教师应根据他们学生的表现优劣拿工资吗
53.Be more like others or be different from everyone else
更从众还是与众不同
54.Does technology make people's lives simpler rather than more complicated
技术使人们的生活变得更加简单而不是更加复杂吗
55.Should people live in a city or a country all their lives instead of moving to another place
人们应该终生住在同一座城市或者同一个国家，而不应搬迁到其他地方去吗
56.Does telephone have greater influence on people's lives than TV
电话对人们生活的影响大于电视吗
57.Is it more important to have rules about the types of clothing that people wear at work or at school
设立规定以限制人们工作或上学时的着装类型有必要吗
58.Are most business people motivated only by the desire for money
大多数企业家只受金钱欲的驱使吗
59.Is it desirable to know events from all over the world
了解全世界发生的事件有必要吗
60.Children should not be allowed to play computer games
不应该允许孩子们玩电脑游戏吗
61.People buy things not because they need them， but because others buy them
人们买东西并非因为需要，而是由于别人也买
62.Is university education the most important factor in a person's success
大学教育是个人成功的最重要因素吗
63.Shouldn't people be permitted to use mobile phones on public transportation vehicles
应当禁止人们在公共交通工具上使用手机吗
64.Should students in all fields be required to take basic science courses
应该要求所有专业的学生都学习基础科学课程吗
65.The most important investment for a big company
对大公司来说最重要的投资
66.Are people now easier to become educated than in the past
现在，人们接受教育比过去容易吗
67.Choosing friends that have fun with or that help you when you need them
选择能与你一起玩乐的朋友还是选择能在你需要时给予帮助的朋友
68.Should children play and study rather than learn how to do household chores
孩子们应该好好学习、开心玩耍，而不必学做家务
69.People would be happier with fewer possessions
所得较少的人会更幸福
70.Should people buy things that are made in their own country
人们应该购买国产商品吗
71.Is it impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork
在团队协作中，如果一个人无法接受批评，就不可能成功
72.Should all teachers be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge
应该要求教师每5年进修相应课程以更新其知识储备吗
73.Should high school students take a course on basic economics
中学生应该学习基础经济学课程吗
74.The best way to teach children about responsibility
教会孩子何谓责任的最好方法
75.Watching a movie： in a cinema or at home
看电影：去电影院还是在家
76.Does an effective leader try to make others feel that they are part of decision-making
一位高效的领导者总是让下属感觉他们也加入到了决策制定的过程之中吗
77.Should parents reward their children with money for the high grades
家长应该对孩子的高分给予金钱形式的奖励吗
78.Will people feel happier when they finish a challenging or difficult work
人们在完成有挑战性或艰难工作时幸福感更强烈吗
79.Should parents help to determine the future of their children
父母应当帮助决定孩子的未来吗
80.A job with low salary and more security or one with high salary but easier to lose
选择工资低但稳定的工作还是工资高但容易失去的工作
81.Are younger school children （age 5 -10） required to study art and music
应该要求5至10岁的已入学儿童学习美术和音乐吗
82.Which are more interesting， movies and TV programs made in your own country or ones made in other
countries
哪些更有趣：国产的电影电视节目还是国外的电影电视节目
83.What should movies and televisions show the audience
电视或电影应该向观众传达些什么
84.Shouldn't teachers show their political or social views to students in the class
教师不应该在课堂上把自己的政治或社会观念传达给学生吗
85.Helping students gain self-confidence or teaching specific knowledge
帮助学生获得自信还是教授他们基本知识
86.Should teachers be paid at least as much as lawyers， doctors， and business leaders are paid
教师的工资至少要和律师、医生和企业家一样高
87.Should university students be required to take at least one course that teaches them the culture of a country
rather than their own
大学生应该选修至少一门有关其他国家文化的课程
88.Do most of the advertisements make products appear better than they really are
大多数广告都美化了商品吗
89.Working 3 days a week with long hours or working 5 days a week with short hours
每周工作3天、每天工作时间较长，还是每周工作5天、每天工作时间较短
90.Can people take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside
与在农村居住相比，人们在大城市居住可以更好地照顾自己的家人吗
91.Is it better for children to choose jobs similar to their parents'
孩子选择与父母相同的工作更好吗
92.In order to achieve happiness for yourself， you have to try to make other people happy
为了获得个人幸福，你必须使他人幸福
93.Should people have hobbies and do physical activities different from their work
人们应该拥有与自己工作截然不同的爱好或进行与自己工作截然不同的体育运动吗
94.Should advertisements targeting children aged between 2 and 5 be banned
应该禁止针对2到5岁儿童的广告吗
95.Do what you already do well or try new things
轻车熟路还是勇于创新
96.A big party with many people or a small party just with family
举办很多人参加的大型聚会还是只有家人参加的小型聚会
97.To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than success
在失败时保持乐观比成功本身更重要
98.Should university students in all fields be required to take history courses
应该要求所有专业的大学生都选修历史课吗
99.Should a person make an important decision alone
人们应该独自作出重要决定吗
100. Is the ability to cooperate well with others more important today than it was in the past
如今，与他人良好合作的能力比过去更重要了吗
101. Will people spend less time on cooking food in 20 years
20年以后，人们用在做饭上的时间会变得更少吗
102.Should governments spend more money on developing Internet access instead of public transportation
政府应该将更多资金投入到互联网建设而不是公共交通建设之中吗
103. We only do what we like to do rather than what we should do
我们只做我们喜欢做的而不做应该做的吗
104. Students who can keep their own rooms organized are more likely to succeed
将自己的房间整理得井然有序的学生更有可能成功吗
105.Should children only play sports for fun rather than in competitions or contests
孩子们参加体育活动应该仅仅以玩耍为目的而不应以比赛为目的吗
106. People who are interested in different things cannot be friends
兴趣不同的人很难成为朋友吗
107. People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team
持有不同观点的人组成的团队无法取得成功吗
108.Challenging plans or practical plans
选择挑战性的计划还是实际的计划
109.There's no need for the government to help those who can help themselves
政府没有必要帮助那些可以自救的人吗
110.Does the way a person is dressed indicate his character or personality
一个人的着装风格是其性格或个性的体现吗
111.Should students spend a year on traveling or working before they go to colleges or universities
在上大学之前，学生应该用一年时间旅行或工作吗
112.Solving problems using personal knowledge and experience or asking for others' advice
运用自己的知识和经验还是询问他人的建议来解决问题
113.Today's parents do not understand their children as well as parents did 50 years ago
当今的父母不如50年前的父母理解自己的孩子
114.Should the government support scientific research that does not have any practical use
政府应该支持那些无任何实际用途的科学研究吗
115. Are newspapers and magazines the best ways to learn about a foreign country
报纸和杂志是了解外国的最佳途径吗
116. Do professional athletes deserve high salaries
职业运动员理应得到高薪吗
117. The advantages and disadvantages of moving to a new city or a new country
搬到另一座城市或另一个国家居住的利与弊
118. Is it important for families to have meals together regularly
家人经常聚餐很重要吗
119. Are our lives better than our grandparents' lives when they were young
我们现在的日子比祖父母小时候的日子要好吗
120. Should schools ask students to evaluate their teachers
学校应该让学生评价他们的老师吗
121. Planning or not planning for your leisure time
对闲暇时间计划与否
122. Should people read only those books that deal with real matters
人们应该只阅读那些描写真人真事的书籍吗
123. Only people who earn a lot of money are successful
只有有钱人才是成功的
124. Items made by hand or items by machine， which do you prefer
你喜欢手工制品还是机器制品
125. Complain in writing or in person
书面投诉还是当面投诉
126. Why is music important to many people
音乐为什么对很多人非常重要
127. Buy a house or a business
买房子，还是买企业
128. Living in university housing or an apartment in the community
住在大学宿舍还是社区公寓
129.Living in places that have the same climate all year long， or in areas where the climate changes several times a year
住在气候终年不变的地方，还是住在气候一年数变的地方
130. Which famous person from history would you like to meet
你希望遇到历史上的哪位名人
131. Have telephone and email made communication between people less personal
电话和电子邮件使得人们之间的沟通缺少人情味儿了
132.Should children begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school
孩子是否应该一上学就开始学外语
133.Hire an inexperienced worker with a lower salary or an experienced one with a higher salary
雇用无经验低薪酬的员工还是有经验高薪酬的员工
134. Are games equally important for adults and children
游戏对成年人和儿童来说一样重要吗
135. What makes a good son or daughter
好儿子或好女儿需具备哪些重要素质
136. Which do you prefer， getting up early or late
你喜欢早起还是晚起
137. Travel alone or with a companion
单独旅行还是结伴旅行
138. Do we need “Never， never give up”
我们是否需要 “永不，永不放弃”
139. Is progress always good
进步总是好事吗
140. A transportation vehicle that has changed people's lives
一种改变人类生活的交通工具
141. Live performance or television broadcast， which is more enjoyable
现场表演和电视转播哪个更精彩
142. Do you like a new high school to be built in your community
你赞成在你的社区建一所新的高中吗
143. Should people sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing
人们有时应该做自己不喜欢做的事情吗
144. The advantages and disadvantages of my city
我的城市的优点与缺点
145. The causes of people's longevity today
现代人长寿的原因
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精彩书摘
Robinson Crusoe is only a dream hero existing in people's fancy world of imagination.As social beings, humans can never do without the help and support from others.Isolation is the strongest enemy in one's career life.It has been widely acknowledged that relating well to others paves the way for people to achieve professional success.However, that does not mean what has been learned in class is not worthwhile.In my opinion, building good relationship with others is as important as studying hard at school.
Above all, knowledge is power, just as Thomas Jefferson once expressed.To some extent, the essences contained within all school subjects simply resemble the concrete frames of architecture.Without them, the building would soon collapse.In order to achieve success in one's future career life, it is imperative for students to study hard at school.Therefore, there is no excuse for any student to shun the most fundamental task of studying.The "No pains, no gains" concept should be deeply rooted in the mind.Diligence is the premise of a bright future.In this regard, we may refer to Madam Curie, a Polish physicist and chemist famous for her pioneering research on radioactivity.She studied hard at school and earned her higher degrees.The subsequent scientific research made her the first person honored with two Nobel Prizes-in physics and in chemistry.She was the first femaleprofessor at the University of Paris.Evidently, these unprecedented achievements owed much to Madame Curie'suntiring efforts at school.
Secondly, the modern world values teamwork, which is a key to career success.Only through interactionswith partners can one master the art of cooperation.This vividly demonstrates the significance of relating wellto others.At school, there are many projects or group work assigned to students.The participation in any projectrequires the united efforts of all group members.During the course of a group task, each individual has to worktogether with their partners.Bearing in mind their common goal, all members are devoted to their assigned partof the task.Just like different components of an engine, everyone is interrelated.If a single part refuses to function,the whole engine may suddenly stop or even break down.It is such a dramatic effect that depicts the value ofworking harmoniously and resolving any conflicts.
Nevertheless, even though we have ascertained the value of diligence at school and also testified to the importance of building good relationships with others, there is still one point that must be especially emphasized.To illustrate, it is not wise to become bookworms and spend all one's school time reading textbooks.By no means could one succeed if he or she is only good at reciting theories and cannot put what has been learned into practice.Therefore, a practical study plan ought'to be made.After all, every student is entitled to spend some time with their friends.
To sum up, working diligently at school is a fundamental task on the part of students.On the other hand, learning how to relate well to others before entering employment is also important.Every single day spent on campus ought to be made full use of, as this crucial period in life definitely constitutes a stepping stone to a brighter future.
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前言/序言
目前，各国已普遍采用托福网考的新模式，即大家所熟知的TOEFLiBT（internet-Based Test），考试结构与考试内容也随着考试模式的变化而有所改变。新托福改革了旧托福的试题框架，新增了口语测试，同时也加强了写作的测试力度，更注重考查应试者的英语综合能力。留学生若想在纯英文环境下完成艰巨的学习任务，扎实的语言功底是必须具备的能力，而托福考试成绩能够比较客观地反映留学生的英语水平，所以受到美、欧、澳、亚各类学校的普遍重视，因而取得傲人的托福高分是考生的共同梦想。
近年来，全球平均每年参加托福考试的人数高达80万。ETS公布的数据显示，2012年中国托福考生人数较2011年增长了32%，预计此增长势头在2013年及以后几年仍将持续。面临如此激烈的竞争，各位考生必须从容应对。而托福写作是考生获取高分必须攻克的一道难关。
在备战托福写作时，许多中国考生为不能快速、有效地提高写作能力而烦恼。而一本高质量的托福范文书则是祛除这块心病的一剂良药。但是，目前市面上的托福范文书所选题目太过陈旧，明显不会再出现在托福写作考试中；有的托福范文中涵盖的写作技巧不够全面，总是用一两种方法写作，并不适合写作基础千差万别的考生；有的托福范文遣词造句不够地道，谈不上有精彩之处，对考生提升写作能力没有太大帮助。倘若备考资料的范文水平不高，又怎么能期待考生的写作水平迅速提高呢？而盲目的练习、背诵与模仿容易使考生陷入写作备考的误区，导致“事倍功半”的尴尬，甚至导致考生留学梦想的破灭。
为了帮助考生以科学的方法攻克托福写作难关，向赴异国求学的光辉目标迈进，这本融入了作者多年心血的《托福高分范文大全》应运而生了。
本书具有以下特色：
特色一：题目新、真、全
新：书中精选的题目全部是最近几年才考过的新题；
真：书中的题目全部来自考生亲历的全真机经；
全：书中题目涵盖教育、科技、传媒、文化、社会、环保等几乎全部托福作文话题。
特色二：通过范文阐释写作技巧
范文应用了托福写作的各种论证技巧，如例证法、对比法、拆分法等。
以范文为媒介，向考生全方位、多角度展现写作技巧是如何运用于写作实践的。
考生可通过精读范文、背诵经典段落以及模仿范文来提高自己的写作水平。
特色三：注重多样化，避免重复单一
范文具备多样化的特色，即实现了文章结构、段落结构、句型结构以及用词的多样化，从而帮助考生开拓思路，且掌握多样化的写作技巧，最终为自己的文章增光添彩，赢得阅卷人的青睐。
特色四：权威把关，精益求精
每篇范文均经过海外资深写作专家的精心润饰，并且由国内顶级托福名师严格审阅把关，力求做到精益求精。
诚然，写作能力的培养绝非易事，但拥有一本优秀的范文书，就如同拥有一位好老师，莘莘学子会在她的指引下，找到开启成功之门的钥匙，进而为快速、有效地提高自己的写作水平奠定稳固的基础，《托福高分范文大全》无疑就是这样一位好老师。衷心祝愿广大考生能够跟随她的脚步，在托福写作备考过程中不断积累、不懈奋斗，并最终在考场上取得梦寐以求的优异成绩！
用户评价
拿到这本《新东方 托福高分范文大全》纯属偶然，当时在书店里漫无目的地翻找，它就静静地躺在那里，封面设计简洁大气，吸引了我。我当时的心情就像一个在迷雾中摸索的旅人，对托福写作的“高分”到底是什么样子，始终没有一个清晰的概念。我参加过几次模考，写作分数总是徘徊不前，那几篇满分范文，我看得懂，却写不出来。我尝试过模仿，也试过背诵，但总觉得隔靴搔痒，无法内化成自己的东西。我最希望从这本书中找到的是一种“通透”的感觉，不只是看到高分的文章，更能理解高分的逻辑，明白作者是如何组织思路，如何选择词汇，如何运用句式来达到如此令人惊叹的效果。我期待的不仅仅是“范文”本身，更是一种“范式”，一种可以被拆解、被学习、最终被融会贯通的写作方法论。我希望能看到文章不仅仅是语言上的优美，更在于思想的深刻，论证的严谨，以及对问题的多角度剖析。如果能有对范文的详细解析，解释为什么这样写能够得高分，那将是我最大的惊喜。我还在探索如何让我的写作摆脱“中式英语”的痕迹，如何让我的观点更加鲜明有力，如何才能在有限的时间内写出既有深度又有广度的文章。这本书，能否成为我写作道路上的指路明灯，让我看到高分的曙光？我带着这样的疑问和期待，翻开了它。
评分拿到这本《新东方 托福高分范文大全》，我首先想到的是，它是否能真正解答我内心深处的困惑：究竟什么样的写作才能称得上是“高分”？在我看来，托福写作的高分不仅仅是语言上的优美，更是思想上的深刻，逻辑上的严谨，以及表达上的精准。我参加过几次托福考试，写作分数总是不尽如人意，这让我对自己的写作能力产生了严重的怀疑。我尝试过阅读一些高分范文，但总觉得它们离我的实际能力太远，我能理解其中的意思，却很难复制其中的精髓。我渴望从这本书中找到一种“可操作性”的学习方法，不仅仅是提供一些优秀的范文，更能深入剖析这些范文的写作思路和技巧。我希望它能教会我如何审题，如何构思，如何组织段落，如何选择恰当的词汇和句式来清晰、有力地表达自己的观点。我尤其希望能从书中学习到如何避免一些常见的写作错误，比如逻辑不清，论据不足，或者语言表达过于生硬。我希望这本书能成为我写作道路上的一个“指南针”，帮助我找到正确的方向，克服写作中的困难，最终实现写作水平的突破。我期待它能给我带来一种“醍醐灌顶”的体验，让我对托福写作有一个全新的认识，并能切实地提升我的写作能力。
评分拿到《新东方 托福高分范文大全》，我的第一反应是，这会是一本“救命稻草”吗？我一直以来对托福写作都有一种莫名的恐惧感，总觉得自己的表达能力远远不够，每次模考，写作分数都是我最大的短板。我能看懂一些网上的高分范文，但总觉得它们遥不可及，像是另一个层面的语言艺术，而我却始终无法触及。我渴望的是一种能够让我“拨开云雾见月明”的引导，而不仅仅是提供一些优秀的范文让我去膜拜。我希望这本书能够教会我如何从根本上提升我的写作能力，而不是简单地教我如何“套路化”写作。我期待它能提供一些实用的技巧，比如如何进行有效的头脑风暴，如何构建清晰的文章结构，如何选择恰当的论据来支撑我的观点，以及如何运用丰富的词汇和多样的句式来增强文章的表现力。我更希望它能帮助我克服在写作过程中遇到的各种困难，比如找不到合适的词语，句子结构单一，或者逻辑不清。我希望能从这本书中学习到一种“思考框架”，一种能够让我面对任何写作题目，都能 confidently 地组织语言，清晰有力地表达自己观点的能力。这本书，能否成为我通往高分写作之路的敲门砖？我带着一份期待，也带着一份对自身不足的清醒认知，翻开了它。
评分翻开这本书，我脑海中第一个闪过的念头是：我需要的不只是“范文”，更是“范思”。我参加过很多次托福考试，写作分数总是在一个不上不下的区间徘徊，这让我非常沮丧。我能理解那些高分范文中的好词好句，但当我试图自己写作时，却总感觉抓不住“精髓”，写出来的文章总显得有些空洞，缺乏逻辑的严谨性和思想的深度。我经常会纠结于如何组织我的观点，如何让我的论证更有说服力。有时候，我会因为找不到恰当的词语来表达某个 nuanced 的意思而感到焦虑，或者写出来的句子结构总是千篇一律，显得单调乏味。我特别希望这本书能够提供一种“解剖式”的学习方法，不仅仅是展示高分范文，更能细致地分析这些范文的每一个组成部分：作者是如何审题的？如何确定文章的主题句？如何选择支持性的论据？如何运用过渡词来连接不同的段落和句子？更重要的是，我希望能从这本书中学习到如何将自己的想法有效地转化为清晰、有力的英文表达，如何让我的写作风格更加自然、流畅，并且具有一定的深度和原创性。我渴望找到一种方法，能够让我真正理解托福写作高分的底层逻辑，而不仅仅是停留在表面的模仿。
评分这本书的到来，更像是在我一片迷茫的备考之路上，偶然间拾到了一张精美的藏宝图，虽然我还不确定宝藏是否就在图上标出的位置，但至少，它给了我一个方向，一个追寻的目标。我一直在思考，托福写作所谓的“高分”，究竟是一种怎样的水平？是纯粹的词汇堆砌？是复杂的句式组合？还是思想的深度与广度？我渴望的是一种能让我“豁然开朗”的顿悟，而不是机械的模仿和背诵。我希望这本书能像一位经验丰富的导师，不仅给我展示优秀的范文，更能深入浅出地剖析这些范文的“高分秘诀”。我期待看到作者如何引导我们去审题，如何构建清晰的文章结构，如何选择恰当的论据来支持自己的观点，以及如何在有限的时间内，将这些要素完美地融合在一起。有时候，我会在写作文时感到词穷，找不到合适的词语来表达我的想法，或者写出来的句子总是显得那么“平淡无奇”。我希望能从这本书中学习到如何拓展词汇量，如何运用更具表现力的词汇，以及如何通过多样的句式来增强文章的表达力。我更希望它能教会我如何将自己的思考逻辑清晰地呈现在纸上，让我的观点更有说服力，让我的文章更有深度。这本书，能否成为我打破写作瓶颈的钥匙？我怀着忐忑而又充满希望的心情，期待着它能给我带来不一样的启示。
评分书是好书，懒得在网上找范文，就直接买书了
评分性价比很高，这样的价能买到这质量非常不错。
评分感觉没啥用!
评分不错的书，趁活动先囤起来
评分还不错的托福用书，加强语法的训练
评分好好好好好好好好好好好好好
评分great
评分感觉京东特别不靠谱，就为了节约一些成本，把光盘给拿出去了， 使用起来很不方便，网上也不好找。
评分巴朗词表的设置很合理。先用用看，学习一段时间再追评。
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